Scholarship / Holt Endowed scholarship essay - VIETNAM CAN DO [4]

*cooperation = corporation
*do not be afraid of taking risk
*domestic market that consists
*who are still influenced with the idea that they have to use foreign brand
*for a young business generation
*Just because they are not able to sell a pair of shoes doesn't mean there is not a demand for them.
*persuading = pursuing
*either be black or white
*choose = chose
*co-operation = corporation
*I listen and exchange my thoughts to my friends and fellow International Students. Or revise sentence
*brands that can not only satisfy domestic consumer

Also not sure about the title.

Otherwise I really liked it :) I really enjoyed how you connected the beginning story from Masan's CEO to the changes that need to take place in order to make Vietnam a strong economic power.

Undergraduate / IS PHYSICS A WOMAN THING?- MY COMMON APP ESSAY. [7]

"Let's the world surprises you."
I'm not sure if this is right. Shouldn't it be "Let the world surprise you"?

Overall I enjoyed the Essay. I have taken Physics in High School and in College and your comments on the subject resound strongly within me :) In my High School course I remember being fascinated about Einstein's theories of relativity. To think time slows down for objects approaching the speed of light is an idea that is counter to common sense but thanks to experimentation Einstein has been proven correct in this respect. It reminds me that it is always important question ideas, not just in physics but in all aspects of life.

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