mlangan
Jan 28, 2010
Undergraduate / UT Liberal Arts School, Sociology major with a minor in Business Foundation, SOP [6]
I am completely lost and need help please. I have a limited amount of time, a few weeks. I have written down ideas, etc for both of my admission essays. I've also done some research in order to tie in some facts about the program and UT. I'm not sure if i'm on the right track or not. I'm apply to UT Liberal Arts School, Sociology major with a minor in Business Foundation. I'm 25, single mom, work full time for a non-profit fine arts assocation in Austin and go to school. I almost died after having my son which has changed my outlook on life in every aspect. I believe my personal essay should be about my son, being a single mom and almost dying after having him and how important it is for me to succeed to show him to never give him and to be a good role model. I shouldn't mention him in my statement of purpose so I am not redundant, correct?
Should my statement of purpose be about why I'm majoring in Sociology or why I'm applying to Liberal Arts? Or should it just be about myself, character and what I want to get out of going to UT? Can you give me any help, I'm struggling a little with exactly what to write about even though I have a lot of ideas.
Please help me get on the right track or narrow down exactly what I'm suppose to be writing about. THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
Here's what I have so far:
started outline.
Statement of Purpose:
--3 examples of sociology related events that you've experienced (ie belize/guatamala (culturally), mason (financially), fact that no one in my immeditate family has graduated from college and extremely important or my (spiritual desire for knowledge & accomplishment )
--why these experiences have led you to desire a future in sociology and how you think the university of texas will help you gain insight into understanding all the aspects of sociology.
-tie in facts about the school/program/employment benefits, anytime you see the opportunity...
(end of 1st paragraph):
-these experiences have led me to conclude that the only thing certain is uncertainty and the world is constantly changing and you have to be willing to adapt to it or else you will be left behind. I know given the chance/opportunity with the right resources and tools I can succeed at anything i desire...(why you being a curious person will benefit from this)
-all of the highs/lows i've been through have only aided my desire for understanding the world of sociology
developing the skills and tools to better understand
----talk about always being curious, especially as a child (when you were experiencing your 3 examples)
--your current work/job and how it ties into philanthropy/sociology
^^social work, etc.
@ the end talk about how even if you're not sure what field you're going to end up in or what you're going to be doing, you're certain that UT/the sociology department will provide you with the right tools and proper foundational skills to go forward with confidence, etc...
Facts About College of liberal Arts off website - And we're committed to the idea that understanding history, society and culture helps students better understand - and, ultimately, thrive in - the world beyond campus. Top-ranked programs in Latin American history, sociology and psychology set the standard for undergraduate excellence. We are among the largest and highest ranked sociology departments in the country. According to the 2009 US News and World Report Guide to Graduate Departments our program tied for 14th in overall quality nationally and ranked among the top 10 sociology departments in public universities. A subset of our undergraduate alumni go on to some of the leading graduate programs and law schools around the country, while most go on to very productive careers in state and local governments, the private sector, and the non-profit sector.
Facts about UT -
From teaching and research to public service, the university's activities support its mission and core purpose: to transform lives for the benefit of society through the core values of learning, discovery, freedom, leadership, individual opportunity and responsibility. The University of Texas at Austin is dedicated to improving the quality of life of the people of Texas and the United States. We are a leading provider of education and research with a depth and diversity of resources unmatched by most other public universities. As an enduring symbol of the spirit of Texas-big, ambitious and bold-the university drives economic and social progress in Texas and serves our nation as a leading center of knowledge and creativity.
Personal Essay-
Mason, hospital/near death experience, being a single mom, perservance regardless of how hard it is, setting a good example for mason to never give up and always follow through...
I am completely lost and need help please. I have a limited amount of time, a few weeks. I have written down ideas, etc for both of my admission essays. I've also done some research in order to tie in some facts about the program and UT. I'm not sure if i'm on the right track or not. I'm apply to UT Liberal Arts School, Sociology major with a minor in Business Foundation. I'm 25, single mom, work full time for a non-profit fine arts assocation in Austin and go to school. I almost died after having my son which has changed my outlook on life in every aspect. I believe my personal essay should be about my son, being a single mom and almost dying after having him and how important it is for me to succeed to show him to never give him and to be a good role model. I shouldn't mention him in my statement of purpose so I am not redundant, correct?
Should my statement of purpose be about why I'm majoring in Sociology or why I'm applying to Liberal Arts? Or should it just be about myself, character and what I want to get out of going to UT? Can you give me any help, I'm struggling a little with exactly what to write about even though I have a lot of ideas.
Please help me get on the right track or narrow down exactly what I'm suppose to be writing about. THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
Here's what I have so far:
started outline.
Statement of Purpose:
--3 examples of sociology related events that you've experienced (ie belize/guatamala (culturally), mason (financially), fact that no one in my immeditate family has graduated from college and extremely important or my (spiritual desire for knowledge & accomplishment )
--why these experiences have led you to desire a future in sociology and how you think the university of texas will help you gain insight into understanding all the aspects of sociology.
-tie in facts about the school/program/employment benefits, anytime you see the opportunity...
(end of 1st paragraph):
-these experiences have led me to conclude that the only thing certain is uncertainty and the world is constantly changing and you have to be willing to adapt to it or else you will be left behind. I know given the chance/opportunity with the right resources and tools I can succeed at anything i desire...(why you being a curious person will benefit from this)
-all of the highs/lows i've been through have only aided my desire for understanding the world of sociology
developing the skills and tools to better understand
----talk about always being curious, especially as a child (when you were experiencing your 3 examples)
--your current work/job and how it ties into philanthropy/sociology
^^social work, etc.
@ the end talk about how even if you're not sure what field you're going to end up in or what you're going to be doing, you're certain that UT/the sociology department will provide you with the right tools and proper foundational skills to go forward with confidence, etc...
Facts About College of liberal Arts off website - And we're committed to the idea that understanding history, society and culture helps students better understand - and, ultimately, thrive in - the world beyond campus. Top-ranked programs in Latin American history, sociology and psychology set the standard for undergraduate excellence. We are among the largest and highest ranked sociology departments in the country. According to the 2009 US News and World Report Guide to Graduate Departments our program tied for 14th in overall quality nationally and ranked among the top 10 sociology departments in public universities. A subset of our undergraduate alumni go on to some of the leading graduate programs and law schools around the country, while most go on to very productive careers in state and local governments, the private sector, and the non-profit sector.
Facts about UT -
From teaching and research to public service, the university's activities support its mission and core purpose: to transform lives for the benefit of society through the core values of learning, discovery, freedom, leadership, individual opportunity and responsibility. The University of Texas at Austin is dedicated to improving the quality of life of the people of Texas and the United States. We are a leading provider of education and research with a depth and diversity of resources unmatched by most other public universities. As an enduring symbol of the spirit of Texas-big, ambitious and bold-the university drives economic and social progress in Texas and serves our nation as a leading center of knowledge and creativity.
Personal Essay-
Mason, hospital/near death experience, being a single mom, perservance regardless of how hard it is, setting a good example for mason to never give up and always follow through...