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Feb 25, 2010
Writing Feedback / what is advantage and disadvantage of a new shopping mall ? [3]
"Shopping mall" It has recently been announced that a new shopping mall may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Mechanism of free-trades of consumerism in these days, shopping mall is the part of large places which are stored of goods and service together. In the big cities, shopping malls are indicated in the economic internal growth of country. Some people seem to be satisfied that it makes their life much better. However, others think that part of shopping malls is negative reasons. This essay will examine arguments for and against a new shopping mall.
Shopping malls can be seen in the part of a big , modern ,and recreated building that why shopping malls is to be built in several reasons. Firstly, the shopping mall is the place of competitive trades that mean a lot of merchandises and services to be exchanged , so the results are activated to good economy. Secondly, shopping mall make many ways of life for many people to be comfortable and convenient , for instance, you can get the word " one stop service" that it provides everything you need such as shopping, playing sport, entertainment, food market and education all inside this place. Moreover, this place is also available many jobs for people because several departments to need more employees that the sing of effective income and employment .
However , aspect of negative points in a big shopping mall has several reasons .As we know that electric energy is supplied to this industry too much. If we consider in the long way of the source of energy to continue using ,we will face to the environmental effects like a global warming. Another problem is influent to small shop in that areas . It is controversial issues for many years due to small shops have no customers . For example, people like to go shopping in the mall because goods are more variations and more choices to them.
No one is not refused that the mall is the place to make our life to be more easy-life and happiness although it has many part of disadvantages , but we always forget them because the mall is available everything more than you need .
"Shopping mall" It has recently been announced that a new shopping mall may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Mechanism of free-trades of consumerism in these days, shopping mall is the part of large places which are stored of goods and service together. In the big cities, shopping malls are indicated in the economic internal growth of country. Some people seem to be satisfied that it makes their life much better. However, others think that part of shopping malls is negative reasons. This essay will examine arguments for and against a new shopping mall.
Shopping malls can be seen in the part of a big , modern ,and recreated building that why shopping malls is to be built in several reasons. Firstly, the shopping mall is the place of competitive trades that mean a lot of merchandises and services to be exchanged , so the results are activated to good economy. Secondly, shopping mall make many ways of life for many people to be comfortable and convenient , for instance, you can get the word " one stop service" that it provides everything you need such as shopping, playing sport, entertainment, food market and education all inside this place. Moreover, this place is also available many jobs for people because several departments to need more employees that the sing of effective income and employment .
However , aspect of negative points in a big shopping mall has several reasons .As we know that electric energy is supplied to this industry too much. If we consider in the long way of the source of energy to continue using ,we will face to the environmental effects like a global warming. Another problem is influent to small shop in that areas . It is controversial issues for many years due to small shops have no customers . For example, people like to go shopping in the mall because goods are more variations and more choices to them.
No one is not refused that the mall is the place to make our life to be more easy-life and happiness although it has many part of disadvantages , but we always forget them because the mall is available everything more than you need .
