Essays / Thesis Statement Critique/Review - Anthropology (Introduction of the plough) [6]

Hello all,

Let me start off by letting you guys know that my writing skills aren't very good to begin with. Just a fact I've come to recognize with time.

Here's a thesis statement I wrote for an anthropology essay I'm starting, you are suppose to choose a human adaptive strategy and discuss its relevant dimensions as well as its advantages/disadvantages.

Let me know what you think:

"One of the most meaningful and recognized adaptive strategies in the transition from horticulture to intensive agriculture is the introduction of plough technology among humans. The introduction of the plough allowed for a number of distinguishing changes across numerous dimensions. Technological, political, ecological, social and biological advantages and disadvantages began to appear, showing us how truly revolutionary the introduction of plough technology affected human society across the globe."

It's a start hopefully, very open to criticism/restructering it. I'm here to learn!

Thanks again!