Undergraduate / Career goals: see the side of things you never expected to see [4]

What are your career goals and how do you expect your education at the Art Institute of Seattle to help you attain them? In what ways will you participate and commit to your education in order to be successful?

Overall, I plan on creating something that people will enjoy and use my skills and talent to make something that I can be proud of. I want to show people the side of things they never expected would be there, through film. High School has been challenging for me, and I know very well that it shows through my grades. I believe this is my chance to push through that fact and show everyone what I really am capable of. My commitment to education and success at this school will include my strive to complete the projects and tasks that give me the sense of fulfillment that I love. I've been told that I'm the type of person who puts their whole heart into things that I'm passionate about. Going to this school will be one of them.

I feel like I need some kind of a stronger ending. And the second to last sentence doesn't feel right.
Any ideas?