Undergraduate / Personal Statement - My brother, Living with Autism [4]

I really like this one and felt that the personal statement stood out to me a lot. Maybe try expanding it a little more, since it seems short - but then again short and sweet is the way to go right? :)

Undergraduate / "The Diversity Club" - one of your extracurricular activities or work experience [11]

I agree with tiger13win on trying to be more descriptive - it does seem plain. Maybe discuss something that you (or the members of the club in general) accomplished within the club?