Undergraduate / Help with writing a career goals essay for Recording and Music Production school [5]

I would like some help with writing an essay to include with my application for Madison Media Institute. I want to get in to their Recording and Music Production program. They want a brief 200-500 word typed essay describing my career goals. It should contain relevant background experience that has assisted me in choosing a career path. And describe how I expect Madison Media Institute to assist me in accomplishing my goals.

So this is what I have so far. I'm not so good with filling in. That's probably what I need help with the most, and maybe no one can help with that really. Still, if you could help me with what I have so far, that would be great! Ugh! I know it's not very good. I included the sentences about my previous job last minute before I posted it. And I do need more words.

My goal for the future is to be happy no matter what I choose to do. I used to work in an office. It was an ok job but I didn't have a passion for it and it didn't challenge me. I got laid off but maybe it was a good thing because now I have an opportunity to do something I'm passionate about.

I have a passion for music. I think working in a job that includes music, will help me achieve my goal for the future. At home, I have enjoyed playing around with Audacity, a free computer program for editing audio. Going to Madison Media Institute will help me learn more about this type of software. It will also give me the tools to work in the Recording and Music Production field.