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Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced??

Films now play an essential role in our lives. They are not only as a tool to help people reduce stress, but also as a beautiful art for people enjoyment. However, people now are influenced by many films containing more sex or violence . In addition to this, the spread of high violent films is becoming more serious than before. This essay will examine some disadvantages of these films and list some ways to deal with them.