sokal393
Oct 19, 2010
Undergraduate / "the continual guidance of these virtues" - FSU - "Vires, Artes, Mores" [4]
This is a really rough draft, but i wanted to know what you thought, and how you think I can make it better? Thanks so much for the help!
Essay Prompt:
For almost one hundred years, the Latin words, "Vires, Artes, Mores" have been the guiding philosophy behind Florida State University. Vires signifies strength of all kinds - moral, physical, and intellectual; Artes alludes to the beauty of intellectual pursuits as exemplified in skill, craft, or art; and Mores refers to character, custom, or tradition. Describe how one or more of the values embodied in these concepts are reflected in your life.
My Essay:
Many people view Latin as a "dead" language, but I decided to awaken my mind and challenge myself by taking Latin class this year. Although I have only been studying this subject for a few months, it has taught me so much already. Learning a new language can be tricky. Each foreign word encloses a deeper meaning waiting to be unfolded. "Vires, Artes, and Mores," three Latin words guiding the philosophy behind Florida State University, each embody profound definitions. Throughout my life, these words have played a significant role in helping me build the person I am today.
Ever since I was four years old, I have been an all-star cheerleader. Training for no less than two hours a night, multiple days a week, over an hour away from home, this sport has consumed my life. In gymnastics, tumbling can be thought of as "an acrobatic discipline." Working hard in the gym, I have embraced "Artes" by perfecting my cheerleading skills with beauty and grace, while still working hard and keeping my grades up in school. In addition to the physical and emotional strain tumbling sets on my body, it requires an ineffable focus not everyone can achieve. "Vires" has helped me acquire this concentration, providing me with strength which has enabled me to experience the thrill and exhilaration of winning a national title and top 3 worlds ranking. Along with these honors, I have been able to use my catholic background and morals to bring sportsmanship to every competition and practice, and receive an American Championship sportsmanship trophy.
Finally, "Mores" can be seen in my life through my character. Cheerleading has helped me build confidence, self respect, and a healthy lifestyle. I have learned how to work with other people through just about anything while basically living in the gym with my teammates. We shared so many of each others joys, challenges, and hardships, not only at practice and competitions, but in all aspects of our school and family lives. Balancing life as both an athlete and a student has taught me to become a very organized person, and has helped me foster a deep sense of dedication and commitment to whatever I set my mind upon.
Overall, cheerleading has been the foundation of my life, but most importantly, it has helped forge my love for sports medicine and physical therapy. With the help of "Vires, Artes, and Mores," I have been able to establish a strong head on my shoulders, and discover not only myself, but who I want to be. I am excited to finally be opening a new chapter in my life by carrying out my love of cheerleading and sports medicine each and every day with my potential career choice in physical therapy. The future can be a scary thought, but with the continual guidance of these virtues, I am confident every little thing will be alright.
This is a really rough draft, but i wanted to know what you thought, and how you think I can make it better? Thanks so much for the help!
Essay Prompt:
For almost one hundred years, the Latin words, "Vires, Artes, Mores" have been the guiding philosophy behind Florida State University. Vires signifies strength of all kinds - moral, physical, and intellectual; Artes alludes to the beauty of intellectual pursuits as exemplified in skill, craft, or art; and Mores refers to character, custom, or tradition. Describe how one or more of the values embodied in these concepts are reflected in your life.
My Essay:
Many people view Latin as a "dead" language, but I decided to awaken my mind and challenge myself by taking Latin class this year. Although I have only been studying this subject for a few months, it has taught me so much already. Learning a new language can be tricky. Each foreign word encloses a deeper meaning waiting to be unfolded. "Vires, Artes, and Mores," three Latin words guiding the philosophy behind Florida State University, each embody profound definitions. Throughout my life, these words have played a significant role in helping me build the person I am today.
Ever since I was four years old, I have been an all-star cheerleader. Training for no less than two hours a night, multiple days a week, over an hour away from home, this sport has consumed my life. In gymnastics, tumbling can be thought of as "an acrobatic discipline." Working hard in the gym, I have embraced "Artes" by perfecting my cheerleading skills with beauty and grace, while still working hard and keeping my grades up in school. In addition to the physical and emotional strain tumbling sets on my body, it requires an ineffable focus not everyone can achieve. "Vires" has helped me acquire this concentration, providing me with strength which has enabled me to experience the thrill and exhilaration of winning a national title and top 3 worlds ranking. Along with these honors, I have been able to use my catholic background and morals to bring sportsmanship to every competition and practice, and receive an American Championship sportsmanship trophy.
Finally, "Mores" can be seen in my life through my character. Cheerleading has helped me build confidence, self respect, and a healthy lifestyle. I have learned how to work with other people through just about anything while basically living in the gym with my teammates. We shared so many of each others joys, challenges, and hardships, not only at practice and competitions, but in all aspects of our school and family lives. Balancing life as both an athlete and a student has taught me to become a very organized person, and has helped me foster a deep sense of dedication and commitment to whatever I set my mind upon.
Overall, cheerleading has been the foundation of my life, but most importantly, it has helped forge my love for sports medicine and physical therapy. With the help of "Vires, Artes, and Mores," I have been able to establish a strong head on my shoulders, and discover not only myself, but who I want to be. I am excited to finally be opening a new chapter in my life by carrying out my love of cheerleading and sports medicine each and every day with my potential career choice in physical therapy. The future can be a scary thought, but with the continual guidance of these virtues, I am confident every little thing will be alright.