appyg
Nov 2, 2010
Graduate / "my achievements in academics" - Statement of Purpose for MS in Computer Science [4]
these are machines which will help in solving complicated problems - these are machines that help solving complicated problems.. (Just making it a little crisp)
Later, I realized that-- May be you could say. .. ever since it has been a subject ...
In my freshman year I spent time learning the basics of the said fields and reveling in the results which now appear trivial.-- Is it necessary?
During this time, life taught me to be patient, flexible, time management etc-- I am not sure if etc is ok to use..
obtained not only practical knowledge but also learnt several techniques which I was never aware of-- may be you can sharpen this sentence further and be precise?
On my job --? Really? Wouldn't it be in my job?
Nothing much about why exactly this univ i feel.. Not sure
Just my 2 cents. I may be not be thorough after all :)
these are machines which will help in solving complicated problems - these are machines that help solving complicated problems.. (Just making it a little crisp)
Later, I realized that-- May be you could say. .. ever since it has been a subject ...
In my freshman year I spent time learning the basics of the said fields and reveling in the results which now appear trivial.-- Is it necessary?
During this time, life taught me to be patient, flexible, time management etc-- I am not sure if etc is ok to use..
obtained not only practical knowledge but also learnt several techniques which I was never aware of-- may be you can sharpen this sentence further and be precise?
On my job --? Really? Wouldn't it be in my job?
Nothing much about why exactly this univ i feel.. Not sure
Just my 2 cents. I may be not be thorough after all :)
