Undergraduate / Essay : The pictures behind my bed-time stories [5]

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BecauseLi ving in Albania means growing up listening to your mother's bedtime "fairytales" about the bloody revenges that still take innocent lives on the north, of the long lines at 5 A. M during the Communist era ...

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