Undergraduate / Admission Essay question, usage of "Vires, Artes, Mores" [4]

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This is my essay:

Airline pilots and Doctors have a duty in common, they both are responsible for the life's of many. They might share similar obligations, but those differ greatly. When a pilot prevents his plane from crashing he saves the life's of many, but that also includes his own. When a doctor saves a life is not because to do so saves his own life too. With this in mind, I made my decision to become a Doctor in the future. I want to be able to say I saved someones life because I wanted, not because I was trying to save mine too. For many the decision to become a doctor takes years of personal realization but for me it's always been my life's calling. I had always love caring for others, even for those who don't care for themselves.

This year in high school I'm finishing my Medical assistant course. I chose to be a medical assistant because I plan to work while attending college and I think working as a medical assistant will give me the experience and prepare me for when I get to med-school. I had the opportunity to do my internship in a hospital, and I could never explain the joy I felt when I was working with the patients. My experience was remarkable and fulfilling. I'm well aware that giving help and support to others is what inspires me the most, and I don't doubt I'll be a great doctor. I will focus not only in the patients diseases but also in the patients needs.

My driving passion to help others is not only concentrated in the medical field. I have volunteer in many homeless shelters, animal shelters and environmental organizations.The experience I gained by volunteering in this organizations have led to a kind of free form education that has helped solidify in my mind what I'm capable of accomplishing and where my interest truly lies. Sometimes I like to help just by doing simple favors to others. I can't help being a compassionate person that enjoys helping. Not everyone appreciate the things I've done for them, yet, I know I made a difference in their life's. I don't expect people to cherish what I do, instead, I just want their respect.

I plan to work all the way toward this sole goal and ignore almost everything else. Even tough I will have to make a lot of sacrifices, my desire of becoming a doctor will never vanish because the saving of one life makes the struggles worth it. Despite the sacrificing struggles and hardships in getting a medical degree, the desire to help others will always be in me. I will devote my life to the improvement of mankind.

Is it good? Any suggestions??? and does it go with what the prompt is asking?

prompt: For almost one hundred years, the Latin words, "Vires, Artes, Mores" have been the guiding philosophy behind Florida State University. Vires signifies strength of all kinds - moral, physical, and intellectual; Artes alludes to the beauty of intellectual pursuits as exemplified in skill, craft, or art; and Mores refers to character, custom, or tradition. Describe how one or more of the values embodied in these concepts are reflected in your life.

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