Graduate / "English, a language of very formal sort" - MA in English Literature SOP [3]

I am marking some grammatical errors

1) language of (the) very formal
2)it is "honors" not honours
3)But(However) it was the works of the great Romantic poets that(who) infused in me the spur to compose my first verse
4)Post that my fascination for literature has only increased as in the course of(during) going through various books
5)it is "punctuation " not punctuations
6) put comma after "horizon"
rest is fine