Undergraduate / 'Healthcare Documentation Integrity' - essay for admission into an Art School [9]

I have to write a 150 word essay why I should be admitted to the program of my choice and also to include how do I expect the school's education to help attain my career goals.

Here is what I came up with:

Graphic design has developed into an art that can be seen everywhere, from magazines to billboards. The graphic design field is very competitive and to learn the skills needed to compete. I would like to be admitted into Miami International University of Art and Design. I have been interested in this field since high school, where I took classes in digital design and I also attended a tech school for graphic design where I worked with different community organizations such as the Orange County Medical Foundation, the Association for Healthcare Documentation Integrity, and Orange County Public Schools to help design logos, letter heads, and building banners. The knowledge gained from working with these real world clients has made me grow not only in my artistic and technological abilities but also intellectually. I expect that through attending Miami International University of Art and Design my knowledge, creativity, and unique ability will continue to grow because of the technical experiences and as the result of working with other students. This will not only help me become a better artist but also build a solid foundation to start my Graphic Design career.