Undergraduate / "the future of physics" - academic interests and/or professional goals - UIUC [5]

I agree for the most part with the posters above and truly found this essay enjoyable to read. I like the structure of the essay and how you discuss why it is that you are interested in majoring in physics. One possible suggestion is at the end, where maybe you could discuss more of what specifically you would like to do with a major in physics and how UIUC can help you to achieve this goal.