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Last Post: Mar 16, 2009
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jenhur   
Aug 31, 2008
Research Papers / Argument for Global Warming, need some ideas [33]

Actually I'm a student in Malaysia.I just started College Composition for few days.I don't really understand the terms of thesis statement or topic.Mind to help me?
jenhur   
Aug 31, 2008
Research Papers / Argument for Global Warming, need some ideas [33]

Humans were to be blame for global warming.Is it okay?I read a few forum and one of it also involve global warming argument.I took that idea.Something about for millennia,humans have treated Earth as a never ending resource...something like that.
jenhur   
Sep 1, 2008
Research Papers / Argument for Global Warming, need some ideas [33]

I see.There's a difference between that 2?My lecturer didn't tell me briefly whether it's a research or opinion.But it's a research paper.Does it mean I should concentrate on research?My lecturer also said that my introduction must be 2 pages.
jenhur   
Sep 2, 2008
Research Papers / Argument for Global Warming, need some ideas [33]

I already done the introduction but I don't think it's a good one.It's almost 2 page too.What should I do?I think I've added some unneccesary information.
jenhur   
Sep 2, 2008
Research Papers / Argument for Global Warming, need some ideas [33]

Here is my thesis.It's not very good though.Hope madam can help me on this.If there's any correction please tell me.I hope to impress my lecturer so if there's any additional information I can add please tell.

For millennia, humans have treated the Earth as a never ending resource, to be utilized and squandered at will. They never cared about the changes or more specifically, the damage they have caused towards the environment by destroying trees, ruin surface of the earth which used to be a beautiful view and were proud by all human beings.

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jenhur   
Sep 4, 2008
Research Papers / Argument for Global Warming, need some ideas [33]

I see.I understand now.You should have be my lecturer.XDIf there's anything else,I'll refer to you.

Miss Gloria,How should I start my first topic sentence?
jenhur   
Sep 5, 2008
Research Papers / Argument for Global Warming, need some ideas [33]

Hmm, i think I'll think of something.By the mean time,I know this is a essay forum,but since you checked my grammar,I think myEnglish isn't that good after all.Mind to teach me?Like when to put was or were,don't or doesn't and when to put a s?
jenhur   
Sep 6, 2008
Research Papers / Argument for Global Warming, need some ideas [33]

It helps a lot! Thank you Miss Gloria. I hope it helps in my mid term exam. One of my high school teacher taught me that english you just have to listen whether it's good or not. She never say anything about these kind of rules at all.
jenhur   
Sep 7, 2008
Research Papers / Argument for Global Warming, need some ideas [33]

Oh..but I like english.But looks like getting an A in examination was not enough after all.Still thank you Miss.Gloria.Through out this semester,there's lot of things I would need your help.Hope you won't be annoyed.
jenhur   
Sep 9, 2008
Research Papers / Argument for Global Warming, need some ideas [33]

MY GOD!!Today I got my first journal paper.I only got 5.5 out of 10!My lecturer thought I duplicate the answer from the internet.The title for the journal was The Story of an Hour.Luckily I told her I did not do that.Hope she will trust me.She said that if she proved I didn't do it,I may get 9 or 8.5 out of 10.LUCKY!!And it's all thanks to you for teaching the grammar.
jenhur   
Sep 12, 2008
Research Papers / Argument for Global Warming, need some ideas [33]

I need help....A lecturer for my Information Technology wants me to do a research paper about Impact of Computer on Society.He wants me to use the Harvard Referencing.Which I have to cite for more author about their opinion.I tried Google but it doesn't help.You have any idea?
jenhur   
Mar 16, 2009
Writing Feedback / a psychology research paper [2]

Hi Gloria!I'm back!Hope you're still 'operational'.I've been given 3 more assignments!!!What a sem for me.Ok.One of it is a psychology research paper which I must talk about substance abuse.Here it is.

Psychology Paper - Introduction

Since the beginning of human existence on the surface of the world, people's found ways to alter their bodies and consciousness by taking substances such as drugs and alcohol. These substances were supposed to be used in good ways especially in the field of medicine. As time passes by where everything is getting advanced every day, people start to take these substances for granted. Instead for the uses of medication, they used these substances for the sake of entertainment which not only causes harm to themselves but as well as the people around them. The excessive uses of these substances are the main root of the term substance abuse. Substance abuse occurs in all socioeconomic groups which include highly educated and professional people as well as those who are uneducated and unemployed. Soon after that, it has been proven that substance abuse not only occurred in adult stage, but as well as adolescents and young children.

Substance abuse is also referred as harmful or hazardous use of psychoactive substances which is alcohol and illicit drugs. Psychoactive substances can lead to dependence syndrome, a cluster of behavioral, cognitive and physiological phenomena that develop after repeated substance use such as marijuana, heroin and alcohol drink. Drug dependence is a compelling need to continue taking a mind-altering drug to induce pleasure or to relieve anxiety and tension and avoid discomfort. Drug dependence is caused by a combination of biologic and psychological factors. Drugs that cause dependence may produce euphoria, feelings of increased mental and physical ability, and altered sense perceptions. Drug dependence can be very powerful and difficult to overcome. The body adapts to the continuous use of a drug that produces dependence, leading to tolerance and to withdrawal symptoms when use stops. Tolerance is the need to use progressively larger amounts of a drug to reproduce the effects originally achieved with the starting amount.

Nowadays, substance abusers can be found almost anywhere. Drugs abusers that abuses drugs such as ecstasy or heroin can be found in pub, disco places or even on the alley. The most common place for substance abusers is pub and disco where they abuse drugs and alcohols. Another type of substance that people abuse is the solvent abuse which involves inhaling the fumes from domestic and industrial products creating a strong intoxication. Solvent are fast drying glues and adhesives, assorted paint and petroleum products, lighter fluid, dry-cleaning fluids, assorted aerosol sprays, and surgical spirit. It is also known as 'glue sniffing' which is abused vastly by young children from age as young as 10-16. The most common method of inhaling solvents is by inhaling them from a plastic bag which is placed over the face. When inhaled, a feeling of strong intoxication takes place almost immediately with users experiencing hallucination. Due to the effects are short lived, it results in frequent use of solvent.

Another type of substance abuse is the alcohol abuse. Alcohol is a drug, and alcohol abuse is every bit as real as drug abuse. Alcohol addiction has serious long term health and legal consequences, and withdrawal can be deadly. Social drinking is common and popular is many cultures all over the world. In several cultures, for example, a glass of wine or beer with a meal is common practice. Celebrations are often punctuated with a glass of champagne or other celebratory cocktail. And in many jobs, going out for drinks after work or entertaining clients with alcohol is the norm. The difference between social drinking and alcohol abuse is when alcohol becomes your focus. One's might only want to attend social events that involve alcohol, or can't enjoy themselves without alcohol. Getting to the bar or making a drink after coming home from work becomes more important than connecting with friends or family. Studies showed that people usually drinks alcohol just to avoid painful feelings or troubled relationship and it is true that drinking alcohol can help but it will also resort to dangerous behavior such as dangerous driving while drunk and increased in driving behavior.

Tons of research and observation by the psychologists have proved that the reasons that substance abuse is occurring has its causes in all kind of perspective including parenting problems, socially and economically. Adolescents that are trapped in substance abuse are mostly due to parenting problems and social problems. For example, a chaotic home environment or ineffective parenting will caused children to mix with friends that will cause negative influence on them such as smoking or sniffing glue. On the other hand, adults that are trapped in substance abuse are most probably caused by economic problem that encourage them to take drugs to relieve their stress or to escape reality so to say. When adults were facing problem such as financial problem, they tend to be under great stress. Unable to solve the problem, they will take drugs especially at the disco taking ecstasy or spending most of their time at the bar drunken themselves up just for the sake of escaping reality. This is few of the most popular cases or causes an individual to takes drug and alcohol. As for drug, most of it is caused by commonly results from a combination of low self-esteem, peer pressure, inadequate coping skills, and curiosity. There is also evidence of familial patterns of addiction.

Definition

The most common way to define substance abuse is excessive use of a substance, especially alcohol or a drug however there is no universally accepted definition of substance abuse. A definition of substance abuse that is frequently cited is that in DSM-IV, the fourth edition of the Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders (DSM) issued by the American Psychiatric Association. The DSM-IV definition is a maladaptive pattern of substance use leading to clinically significant impairment or distress, as manifested by one (or more) of the following, occurring within a 12-month period which is then divided into 2 potential ways to assume how an individual take drugs or alcohols should soon be defined whether it is substance abuse. The first one is recurrent substance use resulting in a failure to fulfill major role obligations at work, school, or home such as repeated absences or poor work performance related to substance use; substance-related absences, suspensions or expulsions from school; neglect of children or household. Next is continued substance use despite having persistent or recurrent social or interpersonal problems caused or exacerbated by the effects of the substance, for example, arguments with spouse about consequences of intoxication and physical fights.

It's still in the process.I still need to do causes and effects and treatments which is supposed to be my member works but I think I can do it on my own.Anyway please help me see whether I'm doing it right so far.I'm kinda stuck for the definition.Hope you can help me.Thank you.
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