Undergraduate / Give an advice on my application essay: education, science [3]

Education is a most critical issue to everyone who has a child. My parents were always occupied with their companies. Because they could not have enough time with me, they were used to concern about my education .Even they did not had steady incomes, they were never hesitated in investing their money for my education. I used to condemn my parents for their absences during period of a teenager. However recently I had realized that it is not something that I should accuse them, because they had invested on me, I could be more preeminent on my academic careers.

Because I was alone during my youth, some people might think I am a solitude person. But in reality, I am very a sociable and lively person. I had steady relationship with people whoever I had related with. And I was very talented in Physical Education class. It leaded me to awarded 1st honored when I was in junior high school. I was a very curious person. When I was in high school I was very excited whenever I had a research projects and especially I was highly interested in biological research project.

Objective of developing my aptitude in biology, I had decided to apply biological science school in university of stony brook. After I have graduated the university, I want to have an occupation that related with medical cares or agriculture. Further more I want to gives positive influence to the unfortunate people.

Practical uses of biological science would be my ultimate goals for studying biology.

I believe there are still lots of unrevealed mystery in biological science such as genetics and the theory of evolution. I have steady desire in researching genetic science because with study of it, we could establish the better method of curing people. And I do not want to believe that we are a descendant of a monkey; I want to prove it that we are just who we are, with researching on it.

I believe destination is a real, because whenever I have had final test during high and junior high school I had got an outstanding grade compare to other classes. It could be nothing defends on one's perspective view, but in my point of view, I believe there was a special reason why I was good at biology. I could be a purpose of God or whomever who has an authority in controlling the world. However I want to study biology.

When I was in high school, I used to participate volunteer for community service. Actually I used cleaned their house and washed cloths for a disable people. From my experiences of a volunteer, I had been awakening my heath for disable people that I should be grown up who can help them. Especially In my academic career, I had decided to study biology to be one who can give a medical help for them. With my great interest in biology and desire to help a disable people, it had leaded me to apply University of Stony Brook as biology major.

Undergraduate / 'The youngest professor in Korea'; USB [NEW]

I used to a dream about study in New York which is an emporium of the world. Recently with steady financial support from my parents, I could have an opportunity to study in New York. I had searched through website and got an advice from my counselor. It led me to decide apply University of Stony Brook. Main reason that had leaded me to apply school is that University of Stony Brook is preeminent in biological science through the world. And every major in USB is ranked above 50th. Therefore I could have a steady faith in USB that they have great interest in developing biology. And I realized USB is one of top class institution in the world from academically achievement of USB. I had read an article about professor in Korea who had graduated from USB. She was a youngest professor in Korea and she said she could not be success in academically if she did not study in USB. Since I had read about her biography I was shocked and envious her. Lastly I had read another article that talks about USB would gives help in development of education in Korea. USB is a far from Korea but close place in my heart.

When I was in elementary school I had a steady interest in a science. I used to enjoy reading a book about researching natural phenomena and our body. Those books I had read in period as a child had influenced to my aptitude for biology. Those book contained science story such as an outer space, an organism and a robot. Especially I had a great interest about a cat. Watching cat's movement and write down about cat's weight and how many times they are eating like a professional researcher. It was a most enjoyable hobby during my youth. As I was getting order, I began to dream about being a scientist. How it would be wonderful if I become a scientist who is researching professionally. And I have a passion to help unfortunate people if I become a scientist who has exceeded knowledge in biological science. My main objective of studying biology is to have an occupation that is related with medical filed so I can give a help to disable people. I do not want to study for being a rich person but for community and the world.