Undergraduate / I am a free bird - Why Yale? Short essay. [8]

Its very good, but I think you should talk more about Yale's unique acadamic programs or clubs.

Undergraduate / "an energy aficionado and intern + business and industrialization" - NYU Stern Supp [3]

ShadoPoig
Both very well written. I suggest you to check out the NYU Abu Dhabi website. And watch the short video about Abu Dhabi. The students basicaly answered the 2nd question. I am applyng to NYU also. Good luck!

Undergraduate / Yale (Why, Criminal Minds, Tetris, Stonehenge, Daily Routine) [5]

Reaper1Shi
I like it. Maybe talk about the motto of yale if possible? To show that you ve actually done some researhces?