Undergraduate / (spend money wisely) + (small village diversity) +(friend from school) NYU Supplement [13]

I noticed that some of your responses don't really answer the question.


The first question isn't asking about why you want to go to NYU but most of your answer seems to focus on that. Try to talk more around your interests in business.


This is where you can talk about NYU. Maybe you can talk about how the diversity in New York will help you to build international relationships at NYU and in business.

The last response is okay. It's a bit generic and doesn't really say alot about you though. Maybe another sentence about why you chose your friend/the effect he had on you.

I hope that this helped, good luck on your application :)

Undergraduate / "Jesus Christ's take on the purpose of religion" - NYU Supplement [8]

Maybe it's just me, but I thought the question was asking what place you would share with them. But then again, it's really up to interpretation because the question at the end is so vague. I think you should include something about a special place, just in case.