Scholarship / Gates - short (little links) and long term goals (graduate from college) [3]

Hey I think your essay is pretty cool :) One thing that I would recommend you to do is, take out the contractions. My English teacher said it's improper to use contractions in an essay. But other than that awesome!!! and hey your from New york Me Too I'm getting my advanced regents diploma as well and I am applying for the millennium gates scholarship :) I'm using your essay as a guide !

Good luck girl :)