Undergraduate / (I want to be a businesswoman) How to write regarding your education goals. [7]

Thank you so much ! Now I stuck in the thesis statement :(( Im almost done with the body paragraph but dont know how to make a powerful thesis :(( I need help.

Undergraduate / (I want to be a businesswoman) How to write regarding your education goals. [7]

Thank you guys, im done with that. Now im writing a paragraph about WORK EXPERIENCE. This is all i wrote but I still need some more sentences. I need help !!

As part of my exchange group experience, I worked at the Fair Scone Booth and Seahawk football concession stand. At the Scone Booth, I was given one job to do and did the same job repeatedly as quickly as I could. At the Seahawk game, I was part of the team that work together to fill customer orders and I was able to do a lot of things. After experiencing both I prefer the type of work that I did at the Seahawk game because I enjoy team work and the variety of job. It will help me to have more opportunity and experience when I work with a team or a group in college or when I have a job. I learned a lot about myself, my work and my life in general.