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Sep 19, 2008
Undergraduate / "The diamond is the hardest gemstone" - admission essay [NEW]
I apology for plagiarizing several sentance from other sources. actually I plagiarzed from my gemstone collection book. and I am astonished that there is same sentance on other wepsite. However I removed and has changed that sentance. please help me~ this time there is no such plagiarizing~
The diamond is the hardest gemstone which has meaning of innocence and constancy. It might be one of most favorite gemstone for wedding and proposal. Most people in the world would have constancy love toward someone. And I have someone very special to give a present of diamond band which is made by me. I am a typical Asian American who understands American and Asian's culture. I was just immigrant to USA when I was just in 7th grade. First time ever I just arrived in America, American students were called me "FOB." Well I did not know what that mean was, but since I am getting order, I just recognized that is making cynical of person who was an immigrant. It was disgracing whenever I heard that word. However I could get a confident in myself from the reality that I was FOB. And there was a most significant person who was helping me to adapt western culture and my language. And she was pursuing me to have interest in Jewelry Art.
Mrs. Lisa was a typical American who was an immigrant from France in 1956. She was lived right next to my house. And she was an also typical American old woman who is living at home alone indeed. Because she may lonely she used invite me to a dinner and I was enjoyed having dinner with her. First year in US school, it was extremely stressful to me, I could not understand a language and did not understand a manner or culture in America. I was FOB. And I had small chance to making a new friend by lacking of English. Mrs. Lisa was my favorite and best friend when I was a teenager. She understood that I was new immigrant as well as she used be in her past. And I could learn speaking English and western culture through her. I became communicable with my peers without any complication. I always have appreciation that Mrs. Lisa's support in adapting western culture. She has afforded me to have a confident that I am an immigrant by saying, she was also an immigrant and the America was made by an immigrant. I was so proud of being an immigrant in USA.
Whenever I had a dinner with Mrs. Lisa, our favorite issue for conversation was about Jewelry and gemstone. She and I used to watch home shopping TV section and had a dream about having a really shiny fine accessory. She had plenty of knowledge about gemstone and symbols of each stone. And her knowledge had influenced me to have great interest in jewelry. Whenever I saw jewelries in any where, I began to have imagination of designing jewelry. And that experiment led me to have interest in jewelry art and have a strong desire to give a present of Diamond band which is made by me to Mrs. Lisa. How it would be wonderful if I design the jewelry and pleasuring people who owns that jewelry. I believe it is more pleasure to deigning jewelry rather than just owning the jewelry. And I will attain that pleasure by taking classes in California College of Arts.
I apology for plagiarizing several sentance from other sources. actually I plagiarzed from my gemstone collection book. and I am astonished that there is same sentance on other wepsite. However I removed and has changed that sentance. please help me~ this time there is no such plagiarizing~
The diamond is the hardest gemstone which has meaning of innocence and constancy. It might be one of most favorite gemstone for wedding and proposal. Most people in the world would have constancy love toward someone. And I have someone very special to give a present of diamond band which is made by me. I am a typical Asian American who understands American and Asian's culture. I was just immigrant to USA when I was just in 7th grade. First time ever I just arrived in America, American students were called me "FOB." Well I did not know what that mean was, but since I am getting order, I just recognized that is making cynical of person who was an immigrant. It was disgracing whenever I heard that word. However I could get a confident in myself from the reality that I was FOB. And there was a most significant person who was helping me to adapt western culture and my language. And she was pursuing me to have interest in Jewelry Art.
Mrs. Lisa was a typical American who was an immigrant from France in 1956. She was lived right next to my house. And she was an also typical American old woman who is living at home alone indeed. Because she may lonely she used invite me to a dinner and I was enjoyed having dinner with her. First year in US school, it was extremely stressful to me, I could not understand a language and did not understand a manner or culture in America. I was FOB. And I had small chance to making a new friend by lacking of English. Mrs. Lisa was my favorite and best friend when I was a teenager. She understood that I was new immigrant as well as she used be in her past. And I could learn speaking English and western culture through her. I became communicable with my peers without any complication. I always have appreciation that Mrs. Lisa's support in adapting western culture. She has afforded me to have a confident that I am an immigrant by saying, she was also an immigrant and the America was made by an immigrant. I was so proud of being an immigrant in USA.
Whenever I had a dinner with Mrs. Lisa, our favorite issue for conversation was about Jewelry and gemstone. She and I used to watch home shopping TV section and had a dream about having a really shiny fine accessory. She had plenty of knowledge about gemstone and symbols of each stone. And her knowledge had influenced me to have great interest in jewelry. Whenever I saw jewelries in any where, I began to have imagination of designing jewelry. And that experiment led me to have interest in jewelry art and have a strong desire to give a present of Diamond band which is made by me to Mrs. Lisa. How it would be wonderful if I design the jewelry and pleasuring people who owns that jewelry. I believe it is more pleasure to deigning jewelry rather than just owning the jewelry. And I will attain that pleasure by taking classes in California College of Arts.