k4nch1
Feb 27, 2011
Undergraduate / "promising marketing career, computer software, engineering" - transfer to NY college [4]
Hi, I am planning to transfer to a college in NY.
The essay topic is basically just telling about personal, academic and career goals.
Below is the essay i have written so far.
I'm planning to submit this essay ASAP.
I am thinking to changed the second paragraph from the last. Because it contains too many information about my current company
Anyway, would you please tell me what you think?
And please give me some idea if there's anything missing or anything to be changed.
Thanks!!!
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My interests and professional experiences have helped me to develop my skills and set me up for a promising marketing career. For the past years, I have been building up my resume to lead to a career in the marketing field. However, I want to further groom myself by receiving an educational foundation and degree in marketing. With everything going digital and businesses understandably calling for better response rates for their investments, I want to receive a degree in a field that expands and compliments my present offerings. Therefore, I am applying for this Unique and Interdisciplinary Studies because I want to be prepared for my future as an international marketing analyst.
Prior to migrating to New York, I lived and studied in Indonesia and Australia. Upon my stay in Australia, I pursued Bachelor of Science in Computer science and Software Engineering. As a person who thinks that education is really important and is a great investment, I also completed a course in export and import management in Indonesia. At each country, I exposed and adapted myself to the country's cultures. However, despite these countries' differences, there was one similarity I noticed and became very interested in - marketing to consumers. Products and consumers may change but every company, no matter their geographic location wants to inform consumers about its offering so that it achieves its ultimate goal of generating revenue. My interest in the marketing field and becoming a marketing professional began and grew with this realization.
Currently, I am a student at LaGuardia Community College, majoring in Business Administration and also the Media Research Analyst in LogicLab, Inc., a company revolutionizing the media planning and buying process by using an advertiser's actual consumer data to match the advertiser with the media vehicles most relevant to the its specific target sets. My position entails analyzing, preparing and confirming media-related data for system upload and client utilization. My exposure to the marketing - specifically targeted marketing - has increased and I want to continue developing my targeted marketing so that my professional experiences are balanced with an educational understanding.
My professional objective is to be an international market analyst. I believe the study field I am choosing in Media Studies and Marketing Management will arm me with the basis and skills I can use to achieve my goal. And when combined with my professional experiences, I know my foundation will only grow stronger, mold me into a finer analyst and prepare me for a long and successful career in the marketing field.
Hi, I am planning to transfer to a college in NY.
The essay topic is basically just telling about personal, academic and career goals.
Below is the essay i have written so far.
I'm planning to submit this essay ASAP.
I am thinking to changed the second paragraph from the last. Because it contains too many information about my current company
Anyway, would you please tell me what you think?
And please give me some idea if there's anything missing or anything to be changed.
Thanks!!!
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My interests and professional experiences have helped me to develop my skills and set me up for a promising marketing career. For the past years, I have been building up my resume to lead to a career in the marketing field. However, I want to further groom myself by receiving an educational foundation and degree in marketing. With everything going digital and businesses understandably calling for better response rates for their investments, I want to receive a degree in a field that expands and compliments my present offerings. Therefore, I am applying for this Unique and Interdisciplinary Studies because I want to be prepared for my future as an international marketing analyst.
Prior to migrating to New York, I lived and studied in Indonesia and Australia. Upon my stay in Australia, I pursued Bachelor of Science in Computer science and Software Engineering. As a person who thinks that education is really important and is a great investment, I also completed a course in export and import management in Indonesia. At each country, I exposed and adapted myself to the country's cultures. However, despite these countries' differences, there was one similarity I noticed and became very interested in - marketing to consumers. Products and consumers may change but every company, no matter their geographic location wants to inform consumers about its offering so that it achieves its ultimate goal of generating revenue. My interest in the marketing field and becoming a marketing professional began and grew with this realization.
Currently, I am a student at LaGuardia Community College, majoring in Business Administration and also the Media Research Analyst in LogicLab, Inc., a company revolutionizing the media planning and buying process by using an advertiser's actual consumer data to match the advertiser with the media vehicles most relevant to the its specific target sets. My position entails analyzing, preparing and confirming media-related data for system upload and client utilization. My exposure to the marketing - specifically targeted marketing - has increased and I want to continue developing my targeted marketing so that my professional experiences are balanced with an educational understanding.
My professional objective is to be an international market analyst. I believe the study field I am choosing in Media Studies and Marketing Management will arm me with the basis and skills I can use to achieve my goal. And when combined with my professional experiences, I know my foundation will only grow stronger, mold me into a finer analyst and prepare me for a long and successful career in the marketing field.
