Ishilied
Mar 12, 2011
Writing Feedback / TOEFL: Does Television destroy our bonds with friends and family? [6]
Looks structurally sound, with a few minor grammatical issues.
I do have a suggestion: look at you're opposition some more. One what grounds are their claims based?
One what grounds are your claims based?
Looks structurally sound, with a few minor grammatical issues.
I do have a suggestion: look at you're opposition some more. One what grounds are their claims based?
One what grounds are your claims based?