erotondo09
Oct 1, 2008
Undergraduate / "I am unique" - UCF admission; UCF community [3]
"I think the qualities and characteristics I posses that would allow me to contribute to the UCF community, is that I try to show everyone I meet that you can't judge a book by its cover, that I strive to eliminate stereotypes, change people's preconceived notions, and show my peers that it truly is what's on the inside that counts. "
if youre going to say this, give an example.
"I know that there are other candidates with better grades and higher test scores, but I also know that if given the chance, I would do everything in my power to prosper and become a contributing part of the UCF community."
This is a nonsequiter and doesn't fit in with the rest of your essay.
"I think the qualities and characteristics I posses that would allow me to contribute to the UCF community, is that I try to show everyone I meet that you can't judge a book by its cover, that I strive to eliminate stereotypes, change people's preconceived notions, and show my peers that it truly is what's on the inside that counts. "
if youre going to say this, give an example.
"I know that there are other candidates with better grades and higher test scores, but I also know that if given the chance, I would do everything in my power to prosper and become a contributing part of the UCF community."
This is a nonsequiter and doesn't fit in with the rest of your essay.
