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Mar 20, 2011
Writing Feedback / Essay about independency and a choice between living with family or moving out [6]
Everyone wants to earn money oneday from himself and become an independent. I think becoming independent in aults lives is better than relying on families for longer time. Becoming independent learns a lot to young adults. It has two advantages.
First, young adults understand the value of time. Time is very important in life. If we miss time, we may loose much more. For example, if I reach at job late, I may get fired and I may loose money. These types of situations make young adults aware about time importance.
Second, young adults understance the value of money. Money is a need of poor people to get food and we only realise when we do not have at some situation. For example, My friend, Jayesh wanted to complete his bachelor program but he could not complete it because his father died in middle of the study and he had to go for job to earn money. At that time, he realized that he might have started earn money or he might have started saving. He would complete his program.
Being an independent in younghood will give starting experience of entire their lives. They may have chance to learn more in their younghood and they may capable to deal with possible problems which may come in their rest of lives. For example, I get a total burden of my life expenses rather than giving to my parents. I will become aware about managing money for my future expenses. If I want to complete my master program, I will start saving money from couple of years, ago which may not create more money problem in middle of the study or starting of it. I will learn how to manage life in my younghood.
In brief, I think being indepedent in young age teach lots of things. It teaches time management, money management and also makes aware of money value.
Word count : 318
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Everyone wants to earn money oneday from himself and become an independent. I think becoming independent in aults lives is better than relying on families for longer time. Becoming independent learns a lot to young adults. It has two advantages.
First, young adults understand the value of time. Time is very important in life. If we miss time, we may loose much more. For example, if I reach at job late, I may get fired and I may loose money. These types of situations make young adults aware about time importance.
Second, young adults understance the value of money. Money is a need of poor people to get food and we only realise when we do not have at some situation. For example, My friend, Jayesh wanted to complete his bachelor program but he could not complete it because his father died in middle of the study and he had to go for job to earn money. At that time, he realized that he might have started earn money or he might have started saving. He would complete his program.
Being an independent in younghood will give starting experience of entire their lives. They may have chance to learn more in their younghood and they may capable to deal with possible problems which may come in their rest of lives. For example, I get a total burden of my life expenses rather than giving to my parents. I will become aware about managing money for my future expenses. If I want to complete my master program, I will start saving money from couple of years, ago which may not create more money problem in middle of the study or starting of it. I will learn how to manage life in my younghood.
In brief, I think being indepedent in young age teach lots of things. It teaches time management, money management and also makes aware of money value.
Word count : 318
I do not know what happened but I have posted again. After first posting, it disappeared.
