jokesh
Jun 2, 2011
Graduate / SoP for master in chemical science? [9]
Pursuing knowledge is a great philosophy of my life and dedicating myself to this journey would be all the better meaningful efforts for me which I've contributed to the humanity. In my childhood I am embraced with the definite dream of becoming a scientist. When I was at University have plan to catch up the master degree, after then surge for doctorate degrees continually, but just after the graduation of my bachelor degree in chemical engineering and technology from xxx University in the summer of year 2008, because of my families economical conditions and their requests onto me, I am unable to continue the further higher education, so I was worked three years till now in different areas such as database, software development and mechanical engineering, even involved in businesses for a while to complete overseas project in China and introducing new technology into Kazakhstan successfully, and that wide range of working experience lends me to recognize again that the necessary and the importance of the pursuing knowledge - the great philosophy. In these years, my purpose for join this master's program in Chemical Science seems to have grown on me with more intensive process over time and set the heartfelt desire for my goal to become a true seeker of knowledge in my field, and, of course, at first step it welcomes by master degree. Goals will not progress by simply thinking about them; action generates success, when creating goals, find ways to make them happen. I m interested in expanding my professional horizons by seeking new challenges in the area of chemical science, so I wish to join the graduate program at xxx University for a Master of Chemical Science, and I now feel that I would be an excellent student here at xxx University.
this is first paragraph of my SoP for master degree for chemical science.
plz, help me to review it, add change etc. plz, guide me to write better SoP.
thanks.
Pursuing knowledge is a great philosophy of my life and dedicating myself to this journey would be all the better meaningful efforts for me which I've contributed to the humanity. In my childhood I am embraced with the definite dream of becoming a scientist. When I was at University have plan to catch up the master degree, after then surge for doctorate degrees continually, but just after the graduation of my bachelor degree in chemical engineering and technology from xxx University in the summer of year 2008, because of my families economical conditions and their requests onto me, I am unable to continue the further higher education, so I was worked three years till now in different areas such as database, software development and mechanical engineering, even involved in businesses for a while to complete overseas project in China and introducing new technology into Kazakhstan successfully, and that wide range of working experience lends me to recognize again that the necessary and the importance of the pursuing knowledge - the great philosophy. In these years, my purpose for join this master's program in Chemical Science seems to have grown on me with more intensive process over time and set the heartfelt desire for my goal to become a true seeker of knowledge in my field, and, of course, at first step it welcomes by master degree. Goals will not progress by simply thinking about them; action generates success, when creating goals, find ways to make them happen. I m interested in expanding my professional horizons by seeking new challenges in the area of chemical science, so I wish to join the graduate program at xxx University for a Master of Chemical Science, and I now feel that I would be an excellent student here at xxx University.
this is first paragraph of my SoP for master degree for chemical science.
plz, help me to review it, add change etc. plz, guide me to write better SoP.
thanks.