Writing Feedback / IELTS --Use cultural heritage to develop international tourism, right or wrong? [4]

Your writting is excellent but you should be aware of some grammar
all the best

Essays / What is the most important in your life; sport or education? [24]

Well, both sports and education are essential, Sports make u healthy, Education leads you to the career.
If you've got a career but lack of good health, you cant enjoy your time

Student Talk / How to speak English fluently and correctly? [62]

You should come to England or any English spoken country

Student Talk / How to improve English writing? Learning through reading. [130]

You should read anything in English as much as you can, because this will improve your vocabulary.

Writing Feedback / "attended a catholic school" - Experiences that define you as a person [4]

Look at tenses first. This is fundamental !

Student Talk / How to improve English writing? Learning through reading. [130]

I recommend you to find a dictionary named "Longman Contemporary Dictionary" ,which includes all essential grammar and usage

Grammar, Usage / "intended [only] for the use?" - Legal disclaimer grammar [4]

"only for" is better, as "only" is an adverb that expands "for"