Undergraduate / Why I applied to Molloy - I need some help with my admission essay [2]

the topic is What factor more than any other caused you to apply to Molloy?

so far I came up with this

For as long as I can remember, I've always wanted to become a psychologist. However, working closely with nurses in a pediatricians office has given me the desire to pursue a career in nursing. With that in mind I began searching for a school that would prepare me for a rewarding and promising career as a nurse. I have chosen to apply to Molloy because of the exceptional nursing program, noted for being the fourth largest in the nation.

any other suggestions