Undergraduate / (Choosing what to be when growing up) - from colombia to texas UT transfer [4]

thank u sooo muuuuch for your help!!!

i added new thing but it doesnt really convince me!
would you mn checking it?
-----------------------------------------------

Choosing what you want to be when growing up is a very challenging decision, but sometimes we born with our passions very clear.
When I was a small girl I used to spend a lot of time wondering if I could create a way to get up in the sky and reach the moon and the stars or just fly like a bird. Since then, I have discovered my passion for the aerospace engineering. This field has completely caught my attention up.

I come from a father who is a pilot and I think he is the one who has transmitted me the passion for airplanes and has given me the opportunity to learn about them. When I was on 5th grade I got the opportunity to assist to a space camp on the Kennedy space center located at Cabo Cańaveral, Fl. This experience showed me how people could get enrolled with space shuttles and rockets; truly this changed my life and from this moment I confirmed my passion and convinced myself that all I wanted to be in life was an aerospace engineer.

During high school I took the toughest classes available. calculus and science always held my attention because I was able to think critically with a logical order. In my physics class, I enjoy taking a calculus concept and applying it to the everyday world.

All my life I have lived in Colombia, a country where the development of the aerospace industry is very small, even though I was able to find a well-qualified university which offers an undergraduate aeronautical engineering program.

I was accepted at Universidad Pontificia Bolivariana to start on January 2010, and as soon as I started my studies...