karremflores
Sep 12, 2011
Writing Feedback / IELTS - Firm discipline is a necessary part of teaching children . agree or disagree [2]
For this case i agree in firm discipline,but it depends in how you handled it,and how the way you discipline the children.Kids are obviously have different kind of attitude and it's important to know them better to avoid them to be force,or make violence and be depart upon you.
Firm discipline is very important,in that way you helping the kids to step in right way,to be a better person in the becoming future.But as i said it depends in how you handle it.Most of the parent's discipline there children in not a good way,and the result is they force their children to make violence with other.The positive result in firm discipline is you can control your children,but in the good way,In the way that children will afraid of you not because you punish them but you just end of there evil doings.They learn much respect than other,and afraid in doing bad and violent things.In that way you can say in your self that your children will grow-up as a better person.
And the best necessary part in teaching children is learn to balance your disciplinary action punish them if needed,but control all your actions,make the children understand you because of their mistakes.Make them feel why you do the things that they assume your wrong..
For all the parent's and to the becoming parent's in future,do the things what's good in your heart for your children and up coming children..
Hoping for your kind and consideration... THANK YOU AND GOD BLESS...
For this case i agree in firm discipline,but it depends in how you handled it,and how the way you discipline the children.Kids are obviously have different kind of attitude and it's important to know them better to avoid them to be force,or make violence and be depart upon you.
Firm discipline is very important,in that way you helping the kids to step in right way,to be a better person in the becoming future.But as i said it depends in how you handle it.Most of the parent's discipline there children in not a good way,and the result is they force their children to make violence with other.The positive result in firm discipline is you can control your children,but in the good way,In the way that children will afraid of you not because you punish them but you just end of there evil doings.They learn much respect than other,and afraid in doing bad and violent things.In that way you can say in your self that your children will grow-up as a better person.
And the best necessary part in teaching children is learn to balance your disciplinary action punish them if needed,but control all your actions,make the children understand you because of their mistakes.Make them feel why you do the things that they assume your wrong..
For all the parent's and to the becoming parent's in future,do the things what's good in your heart for your children and up coming children..
Hoping for your kind and consideration... THANK YOU AND GOD BLESS...