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Posts by LimeLight_2012
Joined: Oct 3, 2011
Last Post: Oct 25, 2011
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LimeLight_2012   
Oct 9, 2011
Undergraduate / 'strive for the best and never give up' - FSU admission [4]

Many people do not have the accurate leadership involve in their life as growing up from childhood to adulthood, several of them suffer from time to time because they were never exposed to the positive guidelines through life. My early childhood I was also embroil around older individuals, for this reason it was formulating me for the maturity levels that I will soon get to in the future. Traveling all across the USA with my grandmother for leadership purposes, I believe that being a role model to other individuals is important because you never know if they will ever have or had the right leadership to abide by in their life. By me being the first born child in my immediate family I didn't know how to abide by certain things, so it's left all on me to lead my younger siblings by an example to help them in everyday situation that they are struggling with.

When I was growing up I was very talented and experienced I was able to do a lot of different things that a lot of young children weren't able to do at my age. My mother and my grandparents provided me with majority everything, and they made sure they supported me in everything that I do. Since my father was in the military so far away meaning that there were only one parent that I had to depend on which was my mother. My mother had difficulties from time to time because she had to quit her job to take care of my disable sister who is suffering from hydrocephalus where she had to have surgery done on her brain; it was quite difficult for her to leave a $17/ hour job. Now she has to be a stay at home mom taking care of my youngest two sisters who recently had surgery.

Approximately about 10% of the class of 2012 desires to make an alteration in the world since everyone is deplorable on behalf of an adjustment to transpire. By we being the ensuing generation advanced with the new technology equipped to precede the responsibility as well as delegating successfully on the work that were assign or left for us to do. To numerous populaces leadership remains observed by as of it being controlling, however I personally look at it as of being looked up to or taking the responsibility to lead populaces the directions you never went but wish you had a better opportunity to go these routes.

Florida State University will benefit me to keep this good leadership ability I have because there are so many diverse programs that FSU offer that will assistance me to upsurge my leadership to higher levels. Getting embroil in peer counseling programs with teens around the FSU community at local middle schools and high schools to keep motivating them to strive for the best and never give up, no matter what no one says do what makes you happy by reaching for the stars, but don't just touch it grab it and hold on to it as long as you can.
LimeLight_2012   
Oct 9, 2011
Undergraduate / 'I plan becoming a petroleum engineer' - ApplyTexas Essay C [5]

your essay is good, you very intelligent and i like how you didn't let your parents divorce get in the way of you and your education.. but what i did noticed was that you use 'I' alot try to eliminate some of them down just a little.
LimeLight_2012   
Oct 9, 2011
Undergraduate / 'opportunity to head overseas' - FSU essay, I have a start [7]

good choice on the college im planning on going there to, but what i did notice you not really talking about learning and how it affects you try to discuss that more.

but you are telling them why FSU will help you to increase your ability in learning...
GOOD JOB SO FAR...!!!
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