mrjojo
Nov 10, 2008
Writing Feedback / Prevention is better than therapy-Correct my mistakes in this brief article [3]
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Prevention is better than therapy ,
nowadays this issue has been proven to everyone that prevention has always been better than therapy . The biggest problem in the world of medical science has been the contagious of the HIV virus , mostly among black people throughout the world .
many infected people has been a large number of various experiments by medical scientists .
today in spite of scientist's warning about dangerous influence of not using condoms in sexual relation , some people has been seen to be defiant about the importance of using the condom and its vital roll in prevention of HIV virus .
I'll be happy if you guys correct mistakes of below passage whether grammatical or dictation and so ... .
Prevention is better than therapy ,
nowadays this issue has been proven to everyone that prevention has always been better than therapy . The biggest problem in the world of medical science has been the contagious of the HIV virus , mostly among black people throughout the world .
many infected people has been a large number of various experiments by medical scientists .
today in spite of scientist's warning about dangerous influence of not using condoms in sexual relation , some people has been seen to be defiant about the importance of using the condom and its vital roll in prevention of HIV virus .