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Oct 17, 2011
Undergraduate / 'My life synonymous to diversity' - my Rutgers essay [7]
My life has always been synonymous to diversity. Being born in India and bought up in the United States of America, I had, and have, a miraculous opportunity to gain significant knowledge of traditions and cultures in both the nations. Due to my father's job, my family had to move several times, mainly during my adolescence; to cities like Boston, Los Angeles, Hyderabad, and Mahwah. During the process of these shifts in location, I had made many friends with contrasting backgrounds; this helped me grow as an individual and learn truths of life that are very essential for one to know. Friends in India have taught me the strong cultural prominence one should have towards religion. Likewise, friends in America have taught me ways to live life to the fullest. My friends in both, India and America have taught me how a ideal human should live life like. Therefore, I have accumulated various truths and skills of life during my family's location shifts. Those truths and skills have, now, have become a huge pile of valuable treasure that will guide me through tough times in the future. Rutgers, being an illuminatingly diversified college, looks like a place where I can truly bring out my ethnic values and morals to betterment of the whole community. My contribution to the already glorifying diversity would be to spread out the morals and values that I had learned from all these prophetic years of my life. I am certain that many people would benefit from my accumulated pile of valuable treasure. Rutgers will help me extend my understanding of life by providing me an opportunity to meet new people with different cultural backgrounds. Therefore, helping me increase the already big pile. The more diversity the more we learn is what my father always used to say and I clearly see the prominence of those words now. With diversity one can truly look at life with a broad range.
Can you guys give some helpful suggestions??
I don't if my essay is good or not...is this good enough???
My life has always been synonymous to diversity. Being born in India and bought up in the United States of America, I had, and have, a miraculous opportunity to gain significant knowledge of traditions and cultures in both the nations. Due to my father's job, my family had to move several times, mainly during my adolescence; to cities like Boston, Los Angeles, Hyderabad, and Mahwah. During the process of these shifts in location, I had made many friends with contrasting backgrounds; this helped me grow as an individual and learn truths of life that are very essential for one to know. Friends in India have taught me the strong cultural prominence one should have towards religion. Likewise, friends in America have taught me ways to live life to the fullest. My friends in both, India and America have taught me how a ideal human should live life like. Therefore, I have accumulated various truths and skills of life during my family's location shifts. Those truths and skills have, now, have become a huge pile of valuable treasure that will guide me through tough times in the future. Rutgers, being an illuminatingly diversified college, looks like a place where I can truly bring out my ethnic values and morals to betterment of the whole community. My contribution to the already glorifying diversity would be to spread out the morals and values that I had learned from all these prophetic years of my life. I am certain that many people would benefit from my accumulated pile of valuable treasure. Rutgers will help me extend my understanding of life by providing me an opportunity to meet new people with different cultural backgrounds. Therefore, helping me increase the already big pile. The more diversity the more we learn is what my father always used to say and I clearly see the prominence of those words now. With diversity one can truly look at life with a broad range.
Can you guys give some helpful suggestions??
I don't if my essay is good or not...is this good enough???