ammarissam
Oct 16, 2011
Scholarship / 'my medical residency period' - to apply for a scholarship in MSc of Public Heath [7]
Hi every one ,
I am not a native english speaker and I'd like to get your opinion about my statement please .
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It was a cold dark night when I was in my sanitary duty in the coronary care unit at XXXX teaching hospital two years ago when a load voice become close and the medical staff dashed in the C.C.U door and few people pushing a bed carrying an unconscious young male patient in his twenties suffering a heart attack, it was a horrible scene. I will never forget that awful moment when I did a resuscitation for a dying patient for more than 30 min then " Tut - Tut" A HEART BEAT !! He came back to life!! I didn't sleep that night and sat thinking why we are losing such young patients whom are neglecting their life by smoking and other bad habits?
As I spent my first months of my medical residency period in the C.C.U. , I fell in love with cardiology as a clinical branch. However, I have never fully appreciated the concept of bad social habits which affect the heart until that unforgettable night. I began to further explore this concept in my second year of residency as I worked in a primary healthcare sector which was different to some extant. I didn't know that it could be of that benefit and that effect in giving management to a vast number of patients and at the same time discovered my hidden skills in leadership, supervision and medical planning which were re-polished during my work as a Director of XXXX PHC center.
By the time my love to Cardiology persisted but modified from being a clinical to be a preventive one, in which my ambition become concentrated on how to spread medical awareness about heart diseases, their effects and ways to prevent them. My desire increased when I became the coordinator of the world heart day activities in XXX city with World Heart Federation, it was a successful day and I recieved a letter of recognition from the head manager of Al-Anbar Health Bureau.
My experience in PHC field , interest and ambition in improving people's health, life and future medical planning in Iraq specifically heart diseases and how to be prevented , have confirmed my desire to continue along this academic path. Through a Masters of Public Health program, I hope to gain a comprehensive understanding of public health research and practice.
And as I am writing this statement I believed that I have a noble goal and winning the ISLP scholarship to study the public health in U.S collages will be the first step in making my dream REAL.
Hi every one ,
I am not a native english speaker and I'd like to get your opinion about my statement please .
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>
It was a cold dark night when I was in my sanitary duty in the coronary care unit at XXXX teaching hospital two years ago when a load voice become close and the medical staff dashed in the C.C.U door and few people pushing a bed carrying an unconscious young male patient in his twenties suffering a heart attack, it was a horrible scene. I will never forget that awful moment when I did a resuscitation for a dying patient for more than 30 min then " Tut - Tut" A HEART BEAT !! He came back to life!! I didn't sleep that night and sat thinking why we are losing such young patients whom are neglecting their life by smoking and other bad habits?
As I spent my first months of my medical residency period in the C.C.U. , I fell in love with cardiology as a clinical branch. However, I have never fully appreciated the concept of bad social habits which affect the heart until that unforgettable night. I began to further explore this concept in my second year of residency as I worked in a primary healthcare sector which was different to some extant. I didn't know that it could be of that benefit and that effect in giving management to a vast number of patients and at the same time discovered my hidden skills in leadership, supervision and medical planning which were re-polished during my work as a Director of XXXX PHC center.
By the time my love to Cardiology persisted but modified from being a clinical to be a preventive one, in which my ambition become concentrated on how to spread medical awareness about heart diseases, their effects and ways to prevent them. My desire increased when I became the coordinator of the world heart day activities in XXX city with World Heart Federation, it was a successful day and I recieved a letter of recognition from the head manager of Al-Anbar Health Bureau.
My experience in PHC field , interest and ambition in improving people's health, life and future medical planning in Iraq specifically heart diseases and how to be prevented , have confirmed my desire to continue along this academic path. Through a Masters of Public Health program, I hope to gain a comprehensive understanding of public health research and practice.
And as I am writing this statement I believed that I have a noble goal and winning the ISLP scholarship to study the public health in U.S collages will be the first step in making my dream REAL.