Lily1030
Oct 18, 2011
Graduate / How am I interested in FINANCE? --Opening paragraph for personal statement [4]
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When I was a sophomore at high school, a coincidence led me to the aspirations for finance and investment. An alumnus named Yawei Wang came to celebrate the 50th Anniversary of our high school and gave a lecture. His humorous and witty statement introduced to me a whole wonderland of finance. Later I learned that he is one of the most outstanding hedge fund managers in China and now holding the title of the Vice President of China Asset Management Co., Ltd. Bearing a curious mind, I asked my mother, a seasoned stock investor, to take me to the trading floor of a Stock Exchange. There I found that what underlies all the small fluctuations in the computer is a finance empire so thrilling yet appealing.
This is the opening paragraph for personal statement. Waiting for instructions!
When I was a sophomore at high school, a coincidence led me to the aspirations for finance and investment. An alumnus named Yawei Wang came to celebrate the 50th Anniversary of our high school and gave a lecture. His humorous and witty statement introduced to me a whole wonderland of finance. Later I learned that he is one of the most outstanding hedge fund managers in China and now holding the title of the Vice President of China Asset Management Co., Ltd. Bearing a curious mind, I asked my mother, a seasoned stock investor, to take me to the trading floor of a Stock Exchange. There I found that what underlies all the small fluctuations in the computer is a finance empire so thrilling yet appealing.
