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Posts by demitrin
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Oct 18, 2011
Undergraduate / 'look for new groups to jam with' - letter to your future dormmate [2]

"Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate - and us - know you better."

Dear future roommate,
Skip the small-talk and don't ask me, "What is your favorite genre of music?" My answer would not make sense. Music taste is not a matter of genre, artist, nor reputation, but rather in the moment characteristics. When I am reading or working on homework I listen to relaxing music, when I am lifting weights I listen to energizing music, and when I am walking I listen to music I can march to. All types of music have a place in my life, whether it is jazz, classical, dubstep, or hip-hop.

I constantly search for new artists; each style conveys unique messages. Exposure to various genres of music is like experiencing different lifestyles. Ricky Nelson captures the 1950's pop culture, while the vast amounts of modern genres illustrate the diversity of our society. Understanding music helps me relate to other cultures.

At all times of the day, I have music playing. I enjoy waking to Radiohead and sleeping to Nujabes. Music provides an escape from daily tribulations. After a fight with my mother or a bad day at work, music calms me. My mind travels to another world without problems. As long as headphones and drumsticks are in reach, I have an emotional outlet.

Music builds bridges for friendships: a common interest, way of life, or simple hobby. I remember when I first joined the school drum line. Initially, I felt out of place, but the people welcomed me and became my closest friends. We created bonds over the hardships of learning our songs, listening to music during breaks, and attending concerts together. I always look for new groups to jam with. If you play an instrument or simply love music, we will get along.

Any feedback is appreciated. Thank you very much.
demitrin   
Oct 28, 2011
Undergraduate / 'Artificial intelligence' - Standford - Experience important to my development [4]

All essays for colleges, including Stanford, need a personal element. This doesn't say anything personal about you or describe who you are. They know what Artificial Intelligence is and what it arises. You need to go the extra mile and SHOW how you USE this idea/experience, how it has shaped your intellectual development, and how you are intellectually EXCITED to incorporate this idea/experience in the future (at their college).
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