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Oct 27, 2011
Undergraduate / 'I am a vibrant figure' - Why are you applying to this college? [5]

There are several colleges in California. I choose this college because it is far away from my home town, and it has lots of nonacademic activities. Most of all, I enjoyed the beautiful campus.

I have spend most of my life in my home town. I knew all the shops and friends and there is nothing exciting to me. Although I enjoyed living in my home town, I need to explore to a broader environment.

The first day I sent o the college. There was an exciting site which attracted me. There were people who gathering to film the movie, and Tom Hanks was the major character. I was impressed by the incident and decide to join this college.

The campus has a very beautiful setting. I have never tired of watching the sunset and flower blooming. It makes the building an exquisite scenery and enhance my study.

It is not easy to choose a college suite for me. However, I found this college did provide me the opportunity to be independent. It is also has versatile life style, and it is a beautiful campus. Based on the above, I choose this particular college to attend.
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