Undergraduate / 'there are no handouts in life' - Uc promt 1 [2]

Hey all i would input on my UC prompt any idea/ criticism would be appreciated.

My family has taught an important message through out my life. If you want to get anywhere in life you have to work hard, there are no handouts. I learned this through my father's actions and my sister's drive not to let her disability stop her from her goals. My father has always worked hard to achieve what he wants to do. My sister has cerebral palsy, but that has not stopped her from letting out the competitive [last name] (not putting personal info online) spirit. She is currently the national record holder for discus and javelin she set in the Para Olympics earlier this year. They are my inspiration.

When I was younger I had come to the conclusion that I wanted to be an attorney. Since then I have stuck to that idea and now it has become my life's goal to become one. I hope that one day I will be the United States Attorney General and I will work as hard as possible to achieve this goal.