Undergraduate / Higher Education Opportunitie Program For Barnard Supplement Essays [NEW]

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Applicants for HEOP. Why are you interested in the HEOP program? What do you hope to achieve by participating in this program?

Answer: As a senior in high school am interested in the HEOP program because it gives opportunities for kids who do not have the enough money to get into the school they want and not the greatest grades. As for me, I been raised with just one parent and it is hard to pay for college as the tuition are high. With the HEOP I am allowed ti get help financially and go into the college. I would have to stop my education because I didnt have enough money to pay off college. I hope to achieve in the HEOP program is get into the college i hope for and has greater opportunities. for students. This is why Barnard College is a great example because it has HEOP and great opportunities for students to become successful women in the future.