archiek
Dec 19, 2011
Undergraduate / 'first inspiration came from my father' - U OF T APPLICATION [4]
Hey Tito, my only suggestion on your answer would be to change, "sharing the gospel of Christ," to "engaging fellow students in meaningful spiritual conversation." As a Christian, I understand what you mean and share your passion, but to a non-Christian reading your essay, your statement might be confusing.
Also, I am a staff advisor with Campus for Christ at U of T, so let me know if you want to get connected when you arrive. My email is archie.kenyon@c4c.ca. Also, if you have trouble finding us, it may be because we're changing our club name to Power to Change. God bless.
Hey Tito, my only suggestion on your answer would be to change, "sharing the gospel of Christ," to "engaging fellow students in meaningful spiritual conversation." As a Christian, I understand what you mean and share your passion, but to a non-Christian reading your essay, your statement might be confusing.
Also, I am a staff advisor with Campus for Christ at U of T, so let me know if you want to get connected when you arrive. My email is archie.kenyon@c4c.ca. Also, if you have trouble finding us, it may be because we're changing our club name to Power to Change. God bless.
