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Jan 20, 2012
Undergraduate / 'internships and a first hand job experience' - Why OSU [3]

Please any corrections would be appreciated thank you!!!!!

Prompt: Why Ohio State University

Other than the fact that I rooted for the Buckeyes during the Rose Bowl, Ohio State University has caught my attention in several unique ways. One of my favorite things about OSU is that it is located in the city of Columbus and it has one of the largest campuses in the United States; I flourish in a large diverse environment. Columbus is gorgeous at night, the streets are lined with restaurants and diners, and the landscape of the campus is breathtaking. As I walked through the streets of the OSU campus, I enjoyed the uniquely diverse student body. OSU also offers an immense numbers of clubs and volunteering opportunities to help me know that OSU wants to provide their students with a gaging activity. I learned that OSU also offers a variety of cultural experiences: Columbus Art Festival, Jazz & Ribs, Festival Latino, The Ohio State Fair, and the Dublin Irish Festival. OSU also offers a wealth of academic opportunity with a variety of programs in many fields of study, all taught by highly effective professors. Studying at OSU will help me get internships and a first hand job experience. A rich and varied student body, extremely respected academic cirriculum, and location in a great Midwestern city makes OSU an absolutely amazing and unique place to study, and I hope to attend this fall. I cannot wait to study and organize my thoughts on The Oval and chant the famous OSU chant in the Buckeye stadium. Although I may not know where my life is headed, I know for a fact that OSU's valuable resources will help me shape my life, and discover my true identity and activity and provide me with the ultimate college experience where I can learn, enjoy, and grow.
ScarySubmit   
Feb 1, 2012
Essays / Essay - positive things about a jet-ski accident. Introduction and thesis? [6]

Take it real slow, first describe the setting like how you got there, talk about the characters and set up a plot. Then show the readers how you got in the accident<... Intro

Then for your body paragraph describe how this accident had a positive impact on you. so like "to learn how to swim, learning about the importance of safety, ect.." goes here.

For you conclusion sum the whole thing up in a four to five sentences.

good luck!
ScarySubmit   
Feb 1, 2012
Undergraduate / 'I felt free of expectations and condemnations' - Saint Mary's Supplement [4]

I love how your essay has such good transistion, but I know that its due soon but if you still have time, show how religion impacted you instead of just saying "Losing him had a tremendous influence on my beliefs and attitude toward religion"

Remember show dont tell!

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