Undergraduate / "Don't send me to America!": Evaluate a significant experience [14]

Wow! This is a really good essay
You should just make it more specific.

Good Luck :)

Undergraduate / "Don't send me to America!": Evaluate a significant experience [14]

You should talk about how you are going to use "wishes" for the future.
Say how you are not afraid of the challenges anymore because you have always have that "minute" to "wind down and reflect."