wapogod
Jan 1, 2012
Undergraduate / I have a Mohawk---commonapp essay for upenn, princeton, amherst, rochester [14]
I would say go with the second of the two conclusions. The mohawk seems to be something more than just a haircut in your essay, and I feel like the second conclusion does a nice job of tying the mohawk into a more general statement regarding your religious status/society.
Hope that helps
I would say go with the second of the two conclusions. The mohawk seems to be something more than just a haircut in your essay, and I feel like the second conclusion does a nice job of tying the mohawk into a more general statement regarding your religious status/society.
Hope that helps