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Nov 30, 2008
Essays / Help with thesis statement on video game addictions [3]

hey i need to write a 8 page essay for sociology and i need to pass in a thesis statement tomorrow on video game addictions, heres what I have so far:

With staggering numbers of increased gamers and amount of time devoted to video
games it is possible that video games could be truly addictive.

can anyone make this better for me or help me make it better?
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