Writing Feedback / Descriptive Composition on City Street at night-feedback&suggestions. [NEW]

From a bird's eye view, this may seem like speckles of various colours in combination to form a bokeh effect of a photograph. Flickering lights, white, reds and blue-a dazing array of colours that fits together perfectly like a jigsaw puzzle. Monolithic towers, painted structures. Each corner throbing with activity. Fumes of cigars and cigarettes fills the air in a rush to blend in with the fumes of vehicles. Neon lights and advertisement boards that are brighter than Times Square. Blazing music everywhere.Deafening monotone honks. Wafts of fast food restaurant smells surrounded by an alley full of dustbins. With this smell hovering in the high humidity, the air felt thick with a scent of hot grease a strong yet intriguing smell,giving me a feel of malicious fire blazing my bare skin like a turkey on thanksgiving. Unfamiliar faces. Familiar faces.Suffocation which have turned into a daily routine, chaotic-like but calming.