rt2012
Jun 7, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'reports on vicious crime attract a lot of viewers' - IELTS2 Essay [5]
Hi , I would be gratefull to you if 'the introduction' on the essay below is corrected. With Regards- rt
''The news about violent crime may frighten and encourage people to do crime. For this reason, some say that these types of news should not be reported in the media such as newspaper or TV ''.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sadly true that nowadays reports on vicious crime attract a lot of viewers and readers of mass media. However, whether the coverage of the news should be banned or not on TV or newspaper as it might influence people into committing crime is going to be discussed in the essay.
Hi , I would be gratefull to you if 'the introduction' on the essay below is corrected. With Regards- rt
''The news about violent crime may frighten and encourage people to do crime. For this reason, some say that these types of news should not be reported in the media such as newspaper or TV ''.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sadly true that nowadays reports on vicious crime attract a lot of viewers and readers of mass media. However, whether the coverage of the news should be banned or not on TV or newspaper as it might influence people into committing crime is going to be discussed in the essay.
