epamolarcoiii
Apr 13, 2012
Essays / "Although hospitals do keep track of their performance..." Argumentative Essay Thesis [3]
Hello EssayForum.com! I am pretty new around here and the forum looks pretty nice.
Anyway, here is my concern, is this a good thesis for an Argumentative Essay. I really have no idea if this is "defendable" enough:
"Although hospitals do keep track of their performance for everyone's sake, it's still hard to put trust on them because they are reported to contribute to the patient's death, and some hospital's staffs are more driven by their salary."
Hello EssayForum.com! I am pretty new around here and the forum looks pretty nice.
Anyway, here is my concern, is this a good thesis for an Argumentative Essay. I really have no idea if this is "defendable" enough:
"Although hospitals do keep track of their performance for everyone's sake, it's still hard to put trust on them because they are reported to contribute to the patient's death, and some hospital's staffs are more driven by their salary."