Undergraduate / 'I will make full use of this rare opportunity' -A short essay for a transfer program [3]

Hello (:

Here's a short essay which I wrote for my submission for an AFS scholarship and it has to be below 100 words or 100 the max. AFS is a transfer student program to another country. In which I am applying to America. Would really appreciate the help given as my english is not that good. Well here goes! I am suppose to write a personal statement which is :

1. describing myself, personality, what is important to me
2. My participation in school and community activities
3. What I hope to gain from this program

My name is Swee Lyn. I am known for my bubbly and sociability persona. I am a sport house captain and the vice-president of the English Society. I have participated in various activities such as debate,filming competitions and leadership scout camps. Furthermore, I have contributed to the needy in spastic centres and have done community services. Helping others is important to me because it keeps me happy.

I hope to gain valuable experience that would make me into a better person who can be of service to my country and also to understand the American culture better.

And this one was a question on why do I deserve this scholarship.It has to be below 30 or max 30 too starting fromI will make

I deserve this scholarhip because I will make full use of this rare opportunity and take pride in what I say and do to promote our unique diverse culture as an ambassador of Malaysia.

Oh and hi a student from Malaysia here :D Haha Thank you very much :D