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May 10, 2012
Book Reports / "The Lottery" and "Lord of the Flies" are similar - help developing my thesis [2]

Is this thesis wrong or bad? My teacher said it 'needed to be developed', but I can't find anything wrong with it in terms of structure.

"The Lottery" and Lord of the Flies are similar in how fear plays a role in authoritarian power, how the black box and the beast both represent tradition, and how standards for what is considered civilization change in isolation.
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